(to be edited a lot)
I catch my thoughts
...then the sensations
& the feelings
then heartbeats
reeling
through different parts
...and then the silence buzzes.
I feel proud
...and it stops.
...then the sensations
& the feelings
then heartbeats
reeling
through different parts
...and then the silence buzzes.
I feel proud
...and it stops.
the self pity has to end...
ReplyDeletekill the I in ur muse... move to she...
and the world will become better... works for me!
u r right...i'll seriously think upon it. The point is I love self-pity :) :(
ReplyDeleteWhat shld i say...enlightening point u brght up.
ReplyDeleteThanx a lot!
yah, right! I agree with Tanuj, Now ur enlightened!
ReplyDeletelol:_)
and that's how tanuj writes those fuck'em all poetry...
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