(to be edited a lot)

I catch my thoughts
...then the sensations
& the feelings
then heartbeats
reeling
through different parts
...and then the silence buzzes.
I feel proud
...and it stops.

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  1. the self pity has to end...

    kill the I in ur muse... move to she...

    and the world will become better... works for me!

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  2. u r right...i'll seriously think upon it. The point is I love self-pity :) :(

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  3. What shld i say...enlightening point u brght up.
    Thanx a lot!

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  4. yah, right! I agree with Tanuj, Now ur enlightened!

    lol:_)

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  5. and that's how tanuj writes those fuck'em all poetry...

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