Divine Revealations! -3

You are not beautiful. I might look rude but I don' say it just like that. I know what beautiful is.
Vast blue ocean
or mountain lakes;
morning dew
or snow flakes;
architecture of bugs;
the glides of birds;
all the life under sea
(though seen only on TV);
whispers and screams
of adolescent streams;
symetries in flowers;
cascadian showers;
sun in winter noons;
unobscured night moons;
...
boobs- small or big
of topless chicks;
...
the tiny fists of tiny infants
(and their peculiar scents);
...
...
some songs; some lyrics;
some equations of physics;
some paradoxes; some quotes;
some math-proofs some wizards wrote;
...
of course, Dada's drives and Dada's slogs;
my perfect defences on swinging balls;
...
...
You see why you are not beautiful. Beautiful is commonplace.
And you are unique, most wonderful, and beyond comparision.
You can not be beautiful. You are an idea...of ideal. Idol. I got the word.
You are 'God'.

Comments

  1. this is Hilarious...
    i guess, you are thinking too much these days...
    this had a decent start, but after some time you just compared anything to any other thing,
    and if by any chance these are the "divine revelations" that you have,
    YOU ARE GOD...

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  2. thats because i come from nature to particular...but all dees thngs Are beautiful to me.

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  3. Hi, thanks for visiting my blog...! your writing is interesting. Since you mentioned haikus, I'm sure you can try a few more. Haikus do follow a syllabic and line rule but there can be variations too...

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  4. Got ur point :)
    carry on....!!!

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  5. I feel in this work you have tried to experiment too much by mixing all sort of stuffs like a complete masala movie. But then also its really good(even excellent in some pieces)

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  6. Mohitpar, ur so into it---but yeah if it's what convince you and positive about it---well, then so be it---

    but boobs? lolzzz---yah yah! okay...

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  7. Some thing different, some thing snazzy !! A different point of view.

    cheers,
    adisha

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  8. nice work!!!
    but u got out of track at some point and even knowing that u continued ... (tere ko defence karna ata bhi hai!!!)

    still, quite a nice work .. lage raho!!

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  9. @all
    i think u all r rt. it becomes bad by the end. my idea was to intentionally degrade it...but the experiment dint come off.

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